Posted Monday, February 5th, 2007
Tonight I imagined the hip
of a woman.
I reached my hand
to the small of her back,
soft and caramel.
Her hip curved and sloped
and I slide my fingers
to the underside
of her belly
that is smooth
I opened my
eyes to see if
hers were closed,
if her face
in a moment
and he looked down
that I wasn't
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Posted by Myfanwy Collins on Monday, February 5th, 2007 at 3:56 PM
This is gorgeous, Patricia.
Posted by nance knauer on Monday, February 5th, 2007 at 4:07 PM
Love the sensuality, the shift at the end. Beautiful, Patricia.
Posted by Kathy Fish on Monday, February 5th, 2007 at 7:32 PM
Stunning work, Patricia.
Posted by Donia Carey on Tuesday, February 6th, 2007 at 11:33 AM
Gorgeous and sensual. Brings to my mind the work of the French poet Pierre Louys.
Posted by Ellen Meister [ firstname.lastname@example.org
] on Wednesday, February 7th, 2007 at 12:39 PM
This is magnificant, Patricia. I love every beautiful word.
Posted by Sharon Hurlbut on Thursday, February 8th, 2007 at 11:21 PM
Sensual and lovely! Beautiful work, Patricia.